Identification of bits that need to be worked on or re-filmed

Although my group and I was not impressed with our rough copy, our audience feedback encouraged us to change our video more. Our audience feedback was very harsh, people mostly spoke about the blank spaces and weird structure of the video.

Moreover, we will work on our music videos, we plan to re-film and re-edit the majority of our music video, this will be stressful but rewarding as we will surely make a music video we are happy with. People were sympathetic to our actress and felt her emotion in some of the sad parts such as catching her boyfriend with another girl therefore we intend to add more emotional parts.