Music treatment

Rihanna- P.s I'm still not over you.

The scene commences with a female who is upset and is writing a letter which every sentence will be filmed, this letter will be about her explaining that she is not over her ex, there will be various previous ones scrunched up around her, she then finishes writing the letter but rips it up as she is in two minds about sending the letter.

The next scene then cuts to a flashback of when the female and her boyfriend would be around his little brother playing, this will be her reminiscing so to symbolise that this is something that happened in the past, a black and white effect will be used. Furthermore, the next scene will be split in four screens and one by one old video clips/pictures appear of memories of the couple

Several calendar pages flick counting down the months that she has not seen him.

Whilst looking through her phone at old pictures of them, she receives a missed call from her best friend is not very happy as she excitingly goes to look on her screen and realises it is not her ex.

She then runs upstairs rapidly locks herself in his room, picks up a jumper (the scene will then quickly cut to a mid-shot of the male, her ex wearing this jumper) and cuts back to the female in her room who is clenching tightly onto this jumper and begins to weep.

Clock slowly rewinds back the time to the first day they met, when they were young kids and she moved down to his neighbourhood and they commence to play with each other’s toys.

Feedback:

Deniece- WICKED!

Precious- It's good, it's in a lot of detail, the concept is very contemporary with young people and love which is a good thing. I just don't understand the beginning part of why she rips the letter.


Jessica- It's really good, it's described in  a lot of depth , whilst reading it you feel as if you yourself are in the music video. Criticisms- get straight to the point, too much waffling.