film treatment

'Vengeance' is a crime-thriller which follows Steven who is caught up in the world of crime, drugs and guns.
Lisa, Stevens girlfiend gets kidnapped at a house party. Everyone seems to be enjoying themselves and partying oblivious to the fact that she has been dragged out of the party and thrown into the back of a car.
She later wakes up in a dark room tied to a chair; screaming, crying and yelling for help; questioning why she is there. One of the kidnappers calls her boyfriend who receives an anonymous phone call from the gang members (who he owes £10,000 too). Rich, one of the gangsters is demanding money from Steve and threatens to kill his girlfriend if he doesn’t receive his money within two weeks. He places the phone to Lisa’s ear who then starts crying even and beging him to save her. Steve tells her that he loves her and will save her before the time is up.

The kidnapper grabs the phone from Lisa and lets him know that he has 2 weeks to pay them back or he will never see his girlfriend again, and he hangs up without giving either of them any time to respond. Throughout the film, the gang make Lisa commit many crimes such as drug dealing and keeping weapons and it is up to her boyfriend to save her from these dangerous tasks.

Steven uses his connections to work with people in the gang who he gets to spy on them and send messages back and forth to his girlfriend. Together they create a plan to set up the gang and runaway with the money.

Audience feedback
Kerry said: "storyline is good, but seems a bit cliche. I think the main plot of lisa being kidnapped and steven being threttened by the gangsters will be an interesting plot to keep the audience entertained. You should explain and introduce the characters a bit more clear in the film treatment, otherwise good"

Karis Jade Wright - "It's a good plot, I would personally go watch it if it was out in the cinemas, the only thing is to make your film treatment a bit more descriptive"

Deniece Ogunbayo- "I like the whole plot of it, like its a good storyline 10/10"

Valentina Uttete- "It's good, really interesting. It gives away the whole story, if that's what a film treatment is supposed to do then yeah it's extremely brilliant"

Anais Suika- " Jesus Christ, it's proper interesting. I like it"